Thursday 17 February 2011

Y SHOULD I WAKE UP....

Y shud i wake up...
Have shattered all my luck n life..
Everythng pinning me like knife..
Days hv burned and nights buried..
Y shud i wake up...

heading on path wd destiny doom
 tears r dried up n heart beat tremoring
veins r flooded wd pain n sorrow..
sand of luck has dropped down on ground...n marks f griefs r inked on skin..
y nt let me sleep forever...

Y shud i wake up...
Have shattered all my luck n life..
Everythng pinning me like knife..
Days hv burned and night buried..
Y shud i wake up...

saga of my life can't b written, ink of grief hv spilled ovr d floor of life...
dipped in an ocean of venom
Wounds n scars hv bcme identity
Pity pity pity...

Y shud i wake up...
Have shattered all my luck n life..
Everythng pinning me like knife..
Days hv burnd and night buried..
Y shud i wake up...
 
never thought ds much i wud hv to suffer fr u..
wd no fresh morning green grass n dew..
become dead being alive...
macabre n haunted...
become annoy of myself n worst enemy
what's d mistake i committed..

Y SHOULD I WAKE UP....

11 comments:

  1. ur flair is heart touching my chum.....so much of pain....how can one bear it.....but there is a way......by remaining asleep....UR WORKS DESCRIBES UR GLOOM TO THE FULLEST....GREAT WORK

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  3. incredible.................... bhai........

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  4. mast hai yaar....... too good!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. Good one bro!!! Welcome to the world of blogging..... :)
    Nice way to start... nice poem :)

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  6. M happy to see the success of "Y SHUD I WAKE UP"...every body liked n appreciated ds heart touching work of mine...But asap dey finish off readng ds ,d question arises in their mind..."Y m I so sad in this poem, N Y shud nt I wake up to face my grievences n difficulties"...I tell dem it's js....just a work of poetry,the wrds nipped wd imagination feels evry one wd sorrow n sry for me...I tell dem M cool n happy wd ma lfe...It hs nothn to do wd ma lfe...

    " Y SHUD I WAKE UP" , I wrote in wee hrs of morning n d clock struck 3 a.m....Lights were switchd off n Hostel was asleep except me...I got nthn to write..so I pickd ma cell phone n startd typing...N I tell u before writing ds I had to spoil ma mood pretty much...n It was all forcefully done n to projct somethn' real ...I had to listen to all those tracks in ma cell phone those were very sad .. taylor swifts "back to December" n nelly "just a dream" are two of dem...n had to recall some of the experiences of ma lfy those were very sad...

    Happy with ma inception to blogging n I feel it was a great start..

    Galore thanx to u all ...

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  7. Smtin unusual..smtin xtraordinary..smtin painful still pleasant..n smtin amazingly magnificent..!! Well done dude..!!

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  8. good!!!! Arun u should be a writer nt an engineer!!!!!!! amazin buddy....:)

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  9. Lovely writing dude...!!!
    keep it up..!!!

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